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14篇优秀作文选登  

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13篇优秀作文选登 - 微微一笑 - 微微一笑的博客1】 My family

There are three people in my family .They are my parents and me.

    My father is a teacher .He is tall and strong. He likes spring best, because

he can plant trees .His favourite food is green beans, they are very healthy .

His birthday is in July.

    My mother is a teacher. Her class is so much fun .She is my English teacher, too .Her birthday is July 25th.She likes fall best, because the weather is cool and windy and she can go hiking with me.

    I am a student .I like winter best, because my birthday is in winter and I can wear my new red coat. My favourite food is beef, it's tasty.

     I have a happy family .I love my parents and they love me.  

 【2】My family

To:Alice @ penpal.com

From:Liu Shizhan @ penpal.com

Dear Alice,

Australia must be fun!I live in China,there are three people in my family,my father ,

my mother and me.My mother is an English teacher.She likes playing computer.

My father is an engineer.He likes playing badminton and playing Ping Pong. I'm

a student.I like playing the guitar and riding my bike.

Write back to me soon,please.

Your new friend,Liu Shizhan.

 【3】My next weekend

 (Guan Chengcheng-A          Liu Shizhan-B )

A:Hello.This is Guan Chengcheng.Is that Liu Shizhan?

B:Yes.Hi,Guan Chengcheng.Can I help you?

A:Yes,please.Can I ask you some questions?

B:Sure!

A:What are you doing now?

B:I'm reading a comic book now.

A:OK.What do you usually do on the weekend?

B:I usually play the guitar and write an article.

A:Wonderful!What are you going to do this weekend? 

B:I'm going to take a trip with my best friend.

A:Can I take a trip with you?

B:Certainly!

A:When are we going?

B:We are going this Sunday afternoon.See you at 2:00.Near the Changyang Square【广场】

.A:OK.See you then

【4】 My next weekend

Today is Friday. Tomorrow is weekend! I think I am going to have a busy weekend. 

        n Saturday morning, I am going to do my homework. Then, I m going to visit my grandparents with my mother .In the evening, Im going shopping with my friend.We re going after dinner. Then we are going to buy some comic books.  On Sunday, Im going to Yi Chang with my mom and dad. We are going to Dongshan Park and K.F.C. for lunch. We’re going to buy a new computer for my grandparents in the afternoon. Then we’re going to go home and watch TV together. That will be fun.

        This is my weekend. I’m so happy ! And you? 

 【5】My next weekend

Saturday is my favourite day. On Saturday morning, I’m going to the supermarket with my mother. On Saturday afternoon, I’m going to do homework. On Saturday evening, I’m going to read books and watch TV. Saturday is sweet for me.

    On Sunday morning, I’m going to read an English book. On Sunday afternoon, I’m going to visit my grandparenst. On Sunday evening, I’m going to play computer game. Sunday is fun for me.

My next weekend is great. I love it! What about you?

 【6】My favourite teachers

Miss Jian and Miss Zhong are my Chinese teacher and math teacher .

    Look,Miss Jian is very tall. She 's 163 cm. She is tall and thin .She is very quiet.She also likes writing.We all like her.She is smart.Her class is so much fun.

   Who is my math teacher? Miss Zhong .What's she like?She is tall and thin,too. She is kind and active.She likes sports.She helps us play.She helps us learn.We all like her.

    Miss Zhong is shorter than Miss Jian.Miss Jian is younger and thinner than Miss Zhong.

    I love my teachers.I don't want to say goodbye to my teachers! What about you ?

 【7】Me

My dear friends,this is me !

    My name is Zhou Mengya. I’m a 12 year- old girl.I have many hobbies.I can play ping-pong. In fact, I like playing ping-pong very much. I really want to be a ping-pong player star ! But I want to be a designer now. Because I like designing things very much. I want to design lots of things for people. My family has three people. My father,mother and me. I have many friends. My  best friend is Lin Yuqi. She and I are close friends.We often read books in the Changyang Library or bookstores. Now, I come to this middle school .I like my new school and my new teachers. From now on , I will study hard every day.

I will do my best,  please remember me—Zhou Mengya.

 【8】My family

My family has three members.   

    My mom is a nurse. She is a good nurse. She works in a hospital . She goes to work by the NO.1 bus . My father is a doctor .He's strong and short. But he is very strict with me.He works at Jing Yangkou hospital. He goes to work by the NO.1 bus ,too. I'm a student .I usually go to school on foot.Tommor, I am going to school by bus.   I love my family.

【9 】My New Friend

Mike is my pen pal. He is my new friend,too.

    He lives in England. His mother works in a school. She is a teacher. She teaches art. She usually goes to work by bike. She likes riding a bike. She thinks it’s good exercise for her health. Because it can keep her thin ,young and pretty. His father works in a hospital. His hobby is listening to music and skating on line. He often goes to work by subway. He is a super doctor. He likes helping people and playing chess with his son. Mike says he is a good father,too.     

    I have a little sister .She is only 2 years old . Mike and his brother are twins.They look the same, but they are very different. I think it’s a very funny thing. Mike likes going to school by bike, but his brother always goes to school by bus. Every evening, Mike reads storybooks,but his twin brother watches cartoons on TV. 

     I write an email to Mike every weekend.He says he is going to Changyang soon. I am very happy to have a new friend. What about you? Do you have a new friend?

【赏析】:

 这是在学完第五单元后要求学生写的一篇作文。目的是通过练笔整和第1到第5单元所有所学内容,让学生学会自己运用所学知识去表达自己的情感,学会用英语交朋友。

 1、小作者能紧紧围绕主题My Friend,写了朋友和朋友家人的职业、工作地点和上班方式,以及各自的爱好,生活习惯等。选材很好,能够达到复习和运用所学知识的目的。

 2、文章采用分段分角色his mother、mother、brother以及作者和朋友的交往的方式写,表达层次清楚。

 3、虽然是英语作文,但是文章依然很有文采。如大量使用形容词使句子显得生动形象:She thinks it’s good exercise for her health. Because it can keep her thin ,healthy and pretty. I think it’s a very funny thing. 文中还采用了对比的手法:I have a little sister .She is only 2 years old . Mike and his brother are twins. 更值得提倡的是通过变换句式表达,使得文章看起来活泼:I am very happy to have a new friend. What about you? Do you have a new friend?

    总之,小学生能写出这么长的英语美文,值得为他喝彩!

 【10】问路对话

A:Excuse  me.Where  is  the  hospital,please?

B:It’s  east  of  the  museum.

A:How  can  I  get  to the museum?

B:You  can  go  by  the  No.1  bus.Get  on the bus at the cinema.Get  off at the museum.Walk straight for two minutes.

A:Then I  want  to  buy  a  book.Where  is  the  bookstore?

B:It’s  north  of  the  hospital.

A:Is  it  far  from  here?

B:No,it’s  not  far.

A:Thank  you  very  much!

B:You are  Welcome!

 【11】My new friend

Amy is  my  new  friend.  She  lives  in  Beijing.  Her  father  works  in  a  bookstore.  He  is  an accountant.  He  goes  to  work  by  subway.

    Her mother is a singer.  She  works  in  a  club.  She  goes  to  work  by  bike.

    Amy  and  her  borther  are  twins.  Her  borther likes sports.  But  Amy  likes  art.  Amy is a student. She is  thin  and  tall.  She is very active.

    Amy likes  playing the violin.  Usually She plays in the  park  on  Sunday.  Sometimes  she  goes  hiking  with  her  mom  and  dad. Amy  often  reads  books  after school. She  goes  to  school on  foot.  She  goes  to  bed  at  10:00.

    Sometimes  I  write  an  email  to  Amy  every  week.  Amy  Says  her  family  is  coming to  ChangYang  one  day.  I am  excited.

 【12】Me

This is me. My Chinese name is Qin Yaxin. My  English name is  Betty.

I am a quiet but pretty girl. I am 12 years old. I am 152 cm  tall. I am a little short and strong. Sometimes I am very funny.  My favourite season is winter. Because my birthday is in winter and  I can go iceskating and make asnowman. In winter. I am so excited. Which food do I like best? I like beef. Because it's healthy and  tasty. I like it very mush. What do I usually do on the weekend? I often play in the sun, play the piano or read books.

My favourite animal is white cat. It is cute and lovely. My  favourite class is English and my favourite teacher is Miss Xie. Because she is stronger and taller than me. She is my good teacher and good friend, too.

【13】【电话对话对话】

Liu:This is Qin Yaxin.  Do you know me?

Chen:Hi! Is that Liu Yun?

 Liu:Yes. Who is that?

Chen:This is Chen Jie. What are you doing now?

 Liu:I'm reading a book. And you?

Chen:I'm watvhing TV.

 Liu:Oh! It's good!

Chen:What do you usually do in the evening?

 Liu:I usually read books.Sometimes I watch TV.

Chen:Great! What are you going to do this weekend?

 Liu:I'm going to have a picnic on Saturday.I’m going to visit my grandparents.

Chen:Super! Can I go with you to have a picnic?

 Liu:Sure,if you like.

Chen:Ok.See you this weekend.

 Liu:See you!

【14】Four Seasons

There are four seasons in a year in China .They are spring, summer,fall and winter . 14篇优秀作文选登 - 微微一笑 - 微微一笑的博客

     I love spring! The weather is windy and warm.Sometimes it is rainy.I can plant trees and flowes in my garden .Spring is green with flowers and songs. My garden is very beautiful! I can watch trees and flowers grow.

   In summer.The weather is very hot and sunny.I wear my new T-shirt and shorts .The sky is blue.The grass is green.I can eat ice-cream and go swimming.

   I love golden! I love fall! In fall,the weather is windy and cool.I can picking apples and eat some fresh fruit and I can watch the leaves fall.

  Winter is so beautiful! It is white and the year is gone.The weather is usually snowy and windy.It is very cold.I can skate,ski and make a snowman.Sometimes I can try to swim in a river with my father .

   I love four seasons in China.They are all nice and I can find many things to do! 14篇优秀作文选登 - 微微一笑 - 微微一笑的博客   

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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